Tips to Transition Time and/or Place
- Mention the time, day, or date
- Name the place
- Describe the place
- Describe the event
- Show the character doing something readers already know the character would be doing at a set time and/or particular place.
- Use transitional words and/or Phrases that Signal Time
- Later that day, week, or month
- The next day
- Two weeks later
- After dinner
- The next time she saw him
- Use transitional words and/or Phrases that Shift Location
- Farther down Main Street
- He traveled to
- The car moved through traffic
- When they reached
- In the library
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This is a very timely post and will be very helpful as I work on my first novel for Camp NaNoWriMo! As a reader, I know what a good transition should read like. As a writer, it’s easy to overlook key elements. Thank for this breakdown!